One big proper English and content sweep of this chapter:

Mention:

• this chapter is a general guide, not a literal reference manual
• what partition types PResizer, FIPS, and PartitionMagic deal with
• subnet mask as a requirement to configure Ethernet interface
• most computers can boot from CDROM/DVD drive
• Windows does not report bad blocks when formatting floppies
• BIOS "list of devices" is commonly known as "Boot Order"
• If old OS loads, BIOS may not support boooting from desired media
• use of "U"ndo in FDisk Editor
• one needs to change their Keymap only if they're using a non-standard keyboard
• in FDisk Editor, when hitting 'C', default value is the largest available block
• BootMgr needs to be installed on both disks 1 and 2 if FreeBSD is being installed on disk 2
• how much space the FreeBSD Ports Collection uses
• purpose of NFS client
• how an improper X configuration can freeze the machine/installation
• how to "Cancel" out of the Package installer
• C-shell (example uses bash)

Remove:

• extranneous words
• periods after list of information required to configure Ethernet and PPP interfaces
• mention that there is "always" conflicts in UserConfig

Change:

• "installation routine will prompt you several times before writing any data to disc" -> ... "will prompt you before" ...
  
  There's only one real FINAL warning

• "Skip to the next section" -> "skip this section"
• "Irrespective of whether" -> "Whether"
• "Newer devices..., and be" -> "Newer devices..., and are"
• "A tape" -> "SCSI or QIC tape"
• <important> -> <warning> in some cases
• Its -> it's in some cases
• "/var directory contains varible length files" -> ... "contains files that are constantly varying"
• Network File Service -> Network File System
• optimise -> optimize
• "then asked" -> "then be asked"
• FreeBSD 3.4 -> FreeBSD &rel.current;
• partition ID 165 -> partition ID of 165

• Insert many commas and remove many others
• Include a link to the latest FreeBSD errata page
• Make use of &ms-dos and &windows entities
• Make use of <filename class="directory"> tags
• Properly markup some <acronym>'s
• Explain when one would use Standard or None as their boot manager
• Clarify when to use IPv6 auto-detection
• Make use of <hostid> tags
• Clarify testing the mouse daemon during configuration
• Remove repeated content about creating installation floppies in
• Advanced Installation section
• Use /floppy when example mounts a floppy
• Remove mention of CDROMs #3-5, since the project no longer publishes them
• Remove mention of how the mini-ISO was not produced prior to 4.4

• Many other minor technical and English clarifications

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